Warehouse Wip

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Warehouse Wip

Postby SvyatLyk » Mon Mar 06, 2017 11:10 am

Hello everyone I'm new to this forum and I'm desperate for some useful critique. I'm working on an abandoned warehouse that i'm doing in Blender. This is a 3d environment project inspirited by the work of Christopher Plush. My renders so far.
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Re: Warehouse Wip

Postby Styxcolor » Wed May 17, 2017 10:43 pm

Sorry, I have no idea about 3D modeling, so I can't help with technical questions. To me as layperson your design looks convincing and has a sinister atmosphere. What exactly would you like to have feedback on?
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Re: Warehouse Wip

Postby AEBL » Thu Jun 01, 2017 7:24 pm

It looks great - but that's not what you want to hear. The first thing I noticed was something off about the lighting, and immediately tried to find the light source - roof. It feels stagnant, so this makes me question what time of day is it? I assume the windows are dusty by the two lying on the floor. Try to bring in some reflective light and colour depending on the hour. Hope to see you again with more work!
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