Jeremy Tries To Level Up

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Re: Jeremy Tries To Level Up

Postby PeachE » Fri Feb 20, 2015 1:25 pm

Hello!
Awesome portraits you have there :D
Nice studies too, keep it up!
(╯°□°)╯︵ ┻━┻ So much information to take in!!! One thing at a time!

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Re: Jeremy Tries To Level Up

Postby Luna » Sat Feb 21, 2015 8:19 am

Good colors, Jeremy! I like frozenstudy1.jpg & shaddyapplied1.jpg you controlled with the color studying! i think that's right! Once your color here can be done like this, should try more color imagination practicings! We know that's hard, but has gonna to try this! @v@~
Keep going, Jeremy! \^_^
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Re: Jeremy Tries To Level Up

Postby jeremygordonart » Sat Feb 21, 2015 9:03 pm

Thanks everyone! : D

More stuff for the Shrine Maiden challenge
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Re: Jeremy Tries To Level Up

Postby PeachE » Sun Feb 22, 2015 2:20 pm

OOoo nice to see perspective lurking in the bg, go forth and apply those nice colour studies you've done!
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Re: Jeremy Tries To Level Up

Postby jeremygordonart » Tue Feb 24, 2015 4:01 pm

PeachE: Yeah haha, this piece really transformed quite a bit from that sketch.
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Re: Jeremy Tries To Level Up

Postby Palladium » Tue Feb 24, 2015 4:23 pm

Is there a reason why that top beam of the archway's a different color? Looking good other than that.
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Re: Jeremy Tries To Level Up

Postby jeremygordonart » Tue Feb 24, 2015 5:23 pm

Someone suggested I make it gold at the top to add more color to the image, and I figured that side was a bit boring with only browns and reds. Not sure if I like it or not. Thanks!
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Re: Jeremy Tries To Level Up

Postby Palladium » Tue Feb 24, 2015 5:34 pm

It just seems out of place since there's no hints of that color throughout the rest of the image. Almost pops out too much. Love the makeup design on her though. It reminds me of Princess Amadala from starwars:D
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Re: Jeremy Tries To Level Up

Postby foxfire » Mon Mar 09, 2015 8:56 am

yeah if you could have fade the side thats further out in the back a little bit it wouldnt look that weird. especially where the edge meet. its too saturated .
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Re: Jeremy Tries To Level Up

Postby Alberto_ » Mon Jul 20, 2015 12:20 pm

Hello,
Nice illustration, I think the perspective it's a off with the archway with relation of the house since the left column it's closer to the house than the right one.
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